Jump to content

Grundi, Thunder Forged


18 replies to this topic

#1
OFFLINE   Tolang

    Senior Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 441 posts
  • Locationin some house, on some street, in some state, in some country, on Earth
  • Summoner Name:Tolang
  • Server:US

Awards

Weekly War - Tier 1 Warlord Shen
Grundi, Thunder Forged

Tags: Tank, Stun, Melee, Manaless

Lore:



Through the battlefields on which Demacia fought, everyone heard the conuinus thunder that boomed at the enemies of Demacia. The source of the thunder is a warrior named Grundi. With every one of his blows, there seemed to be an almost instant flash of lightning and the boom of thunder on the battlefield. He was found by a Demacian captain when he was just a couple months old and was raised by him. Grundi has no idea where he came from, neither did his adopted father. All he came with was a huge double-faced hammer with a lightning bolt on its cheek and a note that said, “This is Grundi, forged by thunder, raise him well, and his lightning shall be to your benefit.” The captain raised him, trained him, and seeing Grundi capabilities, when he came of age, enlisted him in the Demacian army. He has raged thought the battle field ever since. When word of the League came to him, he pleaded with his superiors that he fight on the Fields of Justice for Demacia.

Apperance: He is a huge muscular man with a huge double-faced hammer with a lightning bolt on its cheek, lightly armored. Like Garen with a hammer and less armor

Stats:




Hit Points: 450 / +90 per level
Health Regen (per 5): 7 / + 0.04 per level
Mana: N/A
Mana Regen (per 5): N/A
Attack Speed: 0.65 / +2.2% per level
Damage: 54 / +2.6 per level
Armor: 15 / +4 per level
Magic Resist: 30 /
Range: 125
Movement Speed: 315

Abilities:



(Passive) Lightning Strikes
Every 3rd attack strikes Grundi’s target with a small bolt of lightning for 20/45/70 (+.2 AP) extra magic damage

[Q] Thundering Slam
Grundi slams his hammer on the ground and deals 75/125/175/225/275(+.6 per AD) damage and sends a shock wave in a 300 unit circle area. Enemies farther away from the center of the slam take less damage than those closer (to a minimum of 70%).

CD: 10 secs

Animation: Grundi raises his hammer high and brings it down with such force that sends out a shock wave.

[W] Lightning Speed
Grundi gains the speed of lighting giving him 30%/35%/40%/45%/50% movement and 10%/15%/20%/25%/30% attack speed for 6 seconds.

CD: 15/14/13/12/11 secs

Animation: Grundi's hammer and feet become electrified when he casts it.

[E] Call Lightning
Grundi calls lightning from the skies to strike an enemy for 50/70/90/110/130 (+.6 per AP) magic damage and stunning them for 1.5 seconds. The lightening bounces to an additional 2/2/3/3/4 targets, dealing 10% less damage and 15% shorter stun to each target after the first.

CD: 20/18.5/17/15.5/14 secs

Animation: Grundi stretches his hand toward his target and lightening strikes the target and then bounces to nearby targets

[Ult] Thor’s Avatar
Grundi calls upon Thor, and he is infused with Thor’s energy and gains 40/50/60 (+.6 per bonus AD) attack damage and ability power and 50/65/80 (+.6 per AP) armor and magic resist for 8 seconds.

CD: 100/90/80 secs

Animation: Grundi raises his hammer high in the air and it is struck by lightening and he the begins to glow blue and random sparks will fly off him.



Quotes:





Upon Selection:

-“Lightning shall be our victory, Summoner, and thunder our aftershock.”

Movement/Attacking:

-“With lighting speed, I go.”
-“In a blink of an eye.”
-“They shall face my thunder.”
-“They will feel my lightning.”
-"They won't see it coming."

Taunt:

- “Face the power of Thor!”

Joke:

- "You can't steal MY thunder!"
________________________________________________________________________________

Feedback please!

Edited by Tolang, 31 July 2012 - 11:27 PM.


Sponsor

#2
OFFLINE   Steel Hellkite

    Member

  • Members
  • PipPip
  • 20 posts
I'm a bit confused. He's classified as a fight, but you chose to have his abilities be AP driven, why not push him more towards AD and have his ultimate scale % wise with AP? This would ultimately (teehee) force players to go with a greater ultimate, or a greater early-mid game. Then I would really get behind this character.

Maybe re-work his W ability to be a bit more utility and less attack. The attack speed just seem like overkill with an already strong champion (I see the synergy with his passive however.)

On his E ability, have it decrease by 10-15% after each target.

On his ult, that's just cruel. Forcing him to either go AD or AP when his stun scales AD and his "pewpew" thunder ability scales AP. That means tanks will have awesome "pewpew" and pitiful stuns, while AD champions have "OMG STUN WITH DAMAGE" and hit like trains. Maybe a little bit unbalanced.

#3
OFFLINE   Herbstrabe

    Poet of Destruction

  • Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 247 posts
  • LocationSchafberg
  • Summoner Name:Herbstrabe
  • Server:EU
i think hes quite decent if you change the ult AD/AP problem.

Are you sure "In the blink of an Eye" is not already taken by another Champ? Somehow Ashe creeps into my mind when hearing the sentence.

#4
OFFLINE   Tolang

    Senior Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 441 posts
  • Locationin some house, on some street, in some state, in some country, on Earth
  • Summoner Name:Tolang
  • Server:US

Awards

Weekly War - Tier 1 Warlord Shen

Quote

I'm a bit confused. He's classified as a fight, but you chose to have his abilities be AP driven, why not push him more towards AD and have his ultimate scale % wise with AP? This would ultimately (teehee) force players to go with a greater ultimate, or a greater early-mid game. Then I would really get behind this character.

Maybe re-work his W ability to be a bit more utility and less attack. The attack speed just seem like overkill with an already strong champion (I see the synergy with his passive however.)

On his E ability, have it decrease by 10-15% after each target.

On his ult, that's just cruel. Forcing him to either go AD or AP when his stun scales AD and his "pewpew" thunder ability scales AP. That means tanks will have awesome "pewpew" and pitiful stuns, while AD champions have "OMG STUN WITH DAMAGE" and hit like trains. Maybe a little bit unbalanced.


What i was aiming for was a hybrid AP/AD tank, but i see your point, i'll tweak him some.


Quote

i think hes quite decent if you change the ult AD/AP problem.

Are you sure "In the blink of an Eye" is not already taken by another Champ? Somehow Ashe creeps into my mind when hearing the sentence.


I've never heard it said.

Edit: Oh dang, i meant the stun to be on his E, not Q, it's the reason it had less dmg that the other. Also, should i just take out the 2nd part of his ult's scaling or just make it AD?

#5
OFFLINE   Steel Hellkite

    Member

  • Members
  • PipPip
  • 20 posts
Posted Image

I approve of this character now.

Leave the ult as is, the changes with the stun make him balanced.

#6
OFFLINE   Tolang

    Senior Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 441 posts
  • Locationin some house, on some street, in some state, in some country, on Earth
  • Summoner Name:Tolang
  • Server:US

Awards

Weekly War - Tier 1 Warlord Shen
Lol nice pic. Ok, i thought that might sort out abit of problems.

Now all i need is a bit of artwork. Which isn't going to be fun, because i suck at it >.<

Edit: One more thing, Mana, should i go with or with out it? I myself, was leaning abit more towards mana, but if no mana, i think i might have to raise the CDs abit.

#7
OFFLINE   gamengamenut

    Advanced Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 206 posts
I think that you should do without it, cause there are wayyyyy to many mana champs, how about energy or no cost(like garen)?
Posted Image

#8
OFFLINE   Tolang

    Senior Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 441 posts
  • Locationin some house, on some street, in some state, in some country, on Earth
  • Summoner Name:Tolang
  • Server:US

Awards

Weekly War - Tier 1 Warlord Shen

Quote

I think that you should do without it, cause there are wayyyyy to many mana champs, how about energy or no cost(like garen)?


I think i'm going to go with no mana, but i think i should increase the CD's to balance out the no mana.

#9
OFFLINE   gamengamenut

    Advanced Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 206 posts
YAY! you took my suggestion :) now i'm happy
Posted Image

#10
OFFLINE   javierdsv

    Advanced Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 174 posts
If W cd starts just when the effect is done (Kinda like Kennen Lightnin' Rush) then I approve.

Posted Image Posted Image Posted Image


#11
OFFLINE   gamengamenut

    Advanced Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 206 posts
I guess it is the case with most buff skills like nida's takedown.
Posted Image

#12
OFFLINE   Rakoth

    New Title Here

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 2333 posts
Win.

/approved.

/internetsgiven.

/bows.

Dude... Yes.

#13
OFFLINE   Tolang

    Senior Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 441 posts
  • Locationin some house, on some street, in some state, in some country, on Earth
  • Summoner Name:Tolang
  • Server:US

Awards

Weekly War - Tier 1 Warlord Shen

Quote

If W cd starts just when the effect is done (Kinda like Kennen Lightnin' Rush) then I approve.


Yeah, kind of thought that was implied.

#14
OFFLINE   Tolang

    Senior Member

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 441 posts
  • Locationin some house, on some street, in some state, in some country, on Earth
  • Summoner Name:Tolang
  • Server:US

Awards

Weekly War - Tier 1 Warlord Shen
*Update* (Really only changed some ratios.)

#15
OFFLINE   RileyGang

    Mediocre Solo Queue ELO Hell Zombie

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 392 posts
  • Server:US
Scary, good stuff.. He moves faster than poppy (the other hammer-wielding champion) o,o
Posted ImagePosted ImagePosted ImagePosted Image
self made-pokemon tcg sig ftw..


My Champ Creations:
Chap - Yordle Mercenary
Note: Instead of putting a whole line of links to my newest champ creations Book looks sloppy so re-linked to my corner of boredom.





4 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 4 guests, 0 anonymous users